Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Life Like a Movie

By: Faye, Roberta and Shouq

Susan’s last boyfriend had been a total nightmare, so, as she headed to a blind date with a new guy, she was very nervous about the date. She paned all her way wandering if she would find a good person in her life, and she blamed herself because this new guy who she met on internet might be worse than her last boyfriend. But she kept walking into the restaurant where they agreed to meet each other.


When she arrived, finding he wasn’t there. She thought “Oh, gosh, I probably made one more mistake in my life. What am I doing here? I must be crazy! ...” She looked around the restaurant, there were several kinds of flowers, lilac, wisteria, and rose, which her ex-boyfriend never sent to her. The flowers were colorful, fragrant and pretty; they were so beautiful the same to those she saw on the first date with her last boyfriend at Center Park. But, after several sweet years with her ex-boyfriend, he suddenly became a total different person. He seldom answered the phone called by Susan, even forgot Susan’s birthday; never mention sent gift to her. Susan totally despaired of him, thinking he must love other girl who is rich and beautiful, and said goodbye to him.... Susan was being in a trance for a long time.


Suddenly, someone touched her shoulder, and said: “Susan?” When she turned to face him, she saw a handsome guy with a warm smile on his face. She answered him with a shy smile: “Yes, you must be scott!” They started to stare each other, and Susan was very comfort to him. They talked many interesting topics, it is surprised her that they have a lot of same hobbies, such as playing piano, watching baseball games and even the scary movies. They were interested with each other and decided to have another date at stadium to watch baseball games.


After several days, they met again and talked a lot at the stadium, including funny things in their middle school. What surprised her very much was that, they studied in the same middle school, and Scott was one member of the school baseball team which had received lots of prized in national competition. He mentioned the captain of his team, who is liable, far-sighted, influential, and handsome, had a serious disease and dying. At last, he invited Susan to visit the caption with him. Susan said with a nice smile: “Sure, It’s my pleasure.”


When they arrived at hospital, he first went into the sickroom and then Susan followed him. After looking at the emaciated guy, Susan’s eyes filled with tears. The captain actually was her ex-boyfriend. She finally understood why her last boyfriend was so indifferent with her.

3 comments:

  1. Im sorry...her ex boyfriend is such a kind. He was so sad more than susan felt .. It is an interesting story!! God Job!!thank you! Naho

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  2. Thank you Naho, that was Faye idea. She really has talent to create stories. I, on the other hand, prefer "to give life" to what was written. Congratulations to her.

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  3. Thank you Roberta : )
    You and Shouq gave me several good suggestions to improve the story, and thank both of you^^
    Sad ending always will bring bad mood to readers.
    I'm REALLY sorry to "kill" Susan's ex-boyfriends. As a "murder",kk, I should apologize to her ex-boyfriends: "I'm sorry.":P
    Faye

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